Will u read my poem?

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Jason C	It's awesome for 5 minutes. Sounds depressing. At least you aren't physically hurting yourself. (Or at least I hope not) Poetry, Music, and Art in general are great ways to relax. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

jim	It has powerful and dark themes, however the word choice could use work. It is a poem... be poetic. Let the words flow. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

pxk8524	wow in five minutes? its pretty good i guess Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Sylvia C	I found your poem interesting but it concerns me. Are you talking about you're own personal life if you are please talk to someone - anyone who will listen to you a friend, teacher, counsulor or you're doctor. It could be all you will need is some meds for depression to start feeling better about yourself but do it as soon as possible for you're sake. I can only hope that you're poem is not from personal experience because you seem to have a talent but either way don't ignore it. Take care Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

bambino_babe_27	Very good poem put it in a book Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

I know daa Muffin Man. :]	its great! good work for just 5 minutes! dont listen to the second answer i think its great Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

ipodlady231	well, uh, it's pretty good for 5 minutes. lol. i liked it though Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Juan L	Its sad and emotional, but its good to share your feelings, and people shouldnt cut themselves, it just leads to pain Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

ruby(:	good poem y r u asking us though? Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Maxmillian	Good, good. Probably the best English poem I've ever seen. 'Cause I'm not an English, I don't have any racial comments. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

nvrletyoufall	it is deep.. just dont share the five min part. a poem like that sounds like it took a lot f time and feelings, but overall awesome!! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Dennis M	I think you have issues with cutting yourself from some kind of depression your in, please get some help no one should feel that way. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

anitral10	i think that its good but you should check some of the spelling. and i think that you have true potential Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

M	Real good I like it. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

eve43	i write poetry myself and i think this is really good Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Carry	Hmm, I like it. It really relates to me and my past, and how I messed up badly at a point in life so I understand it well. By any chance does it relate to yourself? Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

mf mf mf mf mf fmf mf mfmfmfmfmf	it expresses your inner feelings and concerns, if it is a relief for u then good Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

curlielox2002	PRETTY GOOD Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Take A Breath	This is a good poem. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

♥ Gina ♥	5 mins? wow this is a great poem.... u used to love to write poems still do.... if u can write that good of a poem in 5 mins just think how good a poem u could make in an hour, day, ect.... Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

itchianna	Horrible sad and a few missing words, read it aloud. For instance: you dont who i am? Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

bamfan876	5 out of 10 Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

effstawp	The lack of capital letters really expresses your raw unjust emotions of anger and anticipation. ... Or it just further proves that you wrote it in five minutes. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Glowfish	"will u read my poem?" "i want you to quit staring at me" ~You really crave attention, but you dont want people starting at you like your weird. You want them praising you or feeling bad for you. Sorry, bad poem I am not going to lie like everyone else did. I am suprised it even took you 5 minutes to write that, no offense. Sounds like a cry for help, someone should call the police and have them trace the account to your house. Then they can take you away and evaluate you / Admit into a mental hospital. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Word.	A little too complain-y and straight-forward for me. There are no illusions, no analogies, nothing. It sounds like you're just talking to someone and separated some of the sentences by making them into stanzas. Not my cup of tea, maybe you should spend a little more time than 5 minutes and stop trying to get people to say how talented you are for writing something so 'deep' so 'fast'. Maybe you should take those five minutes and put it towards writing something great instead of something sub-par that every teenager on the block could create. Writing free verse is like playing tennis with the net down. -Robert Frost Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Gawaine R	You want to draw attention to yourself by screaming but you don't want people to stare at you. There's a bit of a split here in your desires - it might be good to contemplate what it is that you really want. Every teen thinks her pain will never fade. Pain can be stubborn, but it's not eternal. The poem is certainly very emotional and direct - it's a good way to express yourself, so keep on writing. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Jaz1	It sounds like a desperate cry for help. I hope it wasn't from your own personal experience. The writing is good, but it made me feel sick that someone would just quit on themselves by trying to commit suicide. Theres 1-800 numbers out there you can call. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Noreen	its ok... its normal. It's ok for a 5 minute poem i guess. Nothing special though Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Geary	sounds almost emo. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

That One Guy	I PERSONALLY think its pretty Emo, but yeah overall good Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

Dreamer with a Voice!	This is one of the most beautiful poems i have ever read! So sad though! Please tell me it's not true! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No